Construction of the Magazine Advert.. Take Three..

After creating the first draft and analysing the feedback that I recieved, I created two more versions of the magazine advert and asked people which one they prefered. The two adverts are insterted below:

Advert #1 (with a straight edge):

Advert #2 (with a torn paper edge):
Example of feedback from class members:

Jordan - "I like the one with the straight edge more than the one with torn edge".

Jemima - "I think the first one, with the straight edge, is better because it goes with the clean cut font and the style of the photograph of the band".

Miss Ferdinand - "The one with the torn edge adds a more antimainstream edge to the image and makes the band seem more Indie, but I think both of them work well".

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Overall, my group and I found that the majority of the class preferred the magazine advertisement with the straight edge, because they thought that it went well with the 'clean cut' image of the band. Therefore, we decided to choose the advert with the straight edge because not only did it go with convention, but it was also what appealed most to our target audience.

Final magazine advert: